You've written this in a way that makes it seem quite exciting, good, this will interrest people.
I do have some questions. What is it that we are looking at here, please? Is this a newsletter page, an advert, something else? Because what it is will affect what we should be saying about it. Is the gorilla at the bottom your logo? If so, perhaps it is a bit big. You don't need to put your name on the work - we can work that out from who has e-mailed it to us. Oh, and when is it going to be? I know the date, but how can I work out if I will be able to attend? Am I going to be able to book tickets on line?
These are the answers to CJF's questions. 1. this is part of the newspaper page which tells you the upcoming events 2. The Gorilla is our logo but we have come up with an more updated one Hope that helped and thanks for the questions.
I like the background colour and the layout of the text.
ReplyDeleteYou've written this in a way that makes it seem quite exciting, good, this will interrest people.
ReplyDeleteI do have some questions. What is it that we are looking at here, please? Is this a newsletter page, an advert, something else? Because what it is will affect what we should be saying about it.
Is the gorilla at the bottom your logo? If so, perhaps it is a bit big.
You don't need to put your name on the work - we can work that out from who has e-mailed it to us.
Oh, and when is it going to be? I know the date, but how can I work out if I will be able to attend? Am I going to be able to book tickets on line?
These are the answers to CJF's questions.
ReplyDelete1. this is part of the newspaper page which tells you the upcoming events
2. The Gorilla is our logo but we have come up with an more updated one
Hope that helped and thanks for the questions.